Comments on More Precious Than a Carriage

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From: Miss Direction
Date: 07/08/2014
Maybe this one is my I still think it's maybe this one. I can't decide. They're both fabulous. And again, it's the original characters that I loved. You are very gifted with their creation. My only quibble and it's small, was that I think the very beginning was confusing. It felt like a few paragraphs were missing and we started the story in the middle. You explain what is going on shortly after that, but it felt a little incomplete.
From: Pippa
Date: 04/24/2013
Wow. Great story. Wonderful use of OC.
From: akane42me
Date: 09/22/2011
Illya's (ahem) friend is named Linda! And she's got a dog! Why am I not surprised?

Linda, I just love this story. It was recc'd on mfu short storie, but I already have it on my kindle, and it's about time I send you a note about it. I am in awe of your writing. Napoleon and Illya are spot on. And Robin, aw, geez, would that all innocents could be so plucky, so admirable, so memorable.

Well done! It was a pleasure to read.

From: Avery11
Date: 06/07/2011
This is a brilliant, compelling story. The people are so real, the situation so vivid. Several times, I found that I was physically holding my breath as I read. What a powerful gift you have. Thank you so much for writing this.
From: SUE
Date: 06/06/2011
Excellent! I was riveted from the beginning to the end. I love it when I find a good read. Thank you!

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